IM's of the soul...
He spoke mournfully to world:
'my soul burns painfully
remorse stomps on my head
stupid stupid, my soul cries
heart beats faster
for adrenaline
all for what?
just to set myself free
when will it be?'
I ignored the voices around me and returned to him:
'wishing for life to be better
if fate has other plans for me
i know i could never hear his voice again,
but if he wishes he could see my words...
i'm sorry. i love you.'
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Song that inspired this blog: 'The Meadow Song' - Erica Rae
"i'll take the pain,
i'll stand the pain for you, my dear
if that's the case"
Side Note: The song I quoted wasn't an actual legit studio recording. It was a song written by a girl on youtube that I fell in love with. Youtube it! It's such a relaxing melody...
wonderful! i love your writing .. but one suggestion babe if you dont mind me saying.. i see a common theme going on with your blogs.. i would love to see something out of your realm of comfort .. only because I genuinely believe you are a good writer
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ReplyDeleteGreat poem, but Camille is right. Shake things up a bit.
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